This was a really big concept to put into a smaller story. I enjoyed reading about what was going on and the dramas of these all-powerful seasonal beings. I feel like the solution was very cut and dry and without consequence which is why I wonder why they didn't do that before. I guess they were waiting because they thought she would eventually calm down accept what happened to her lover?
I liked the art and backgrounds a lot, they have charm, and imagination put into them. Sometimes the text went below the box and off the screen, like twice, and the music could've been calmer or more intense as it seemed like a more lighthearted situation was going on, other than the death of humanity. The music sounded urgent but gave a fun and pleasant tone making the mood of the music not really reflect any of the feelings that the characters were going through.
I don't really like giving out big criticisms like this but, this has a lot of potential. I saw that you had more visual novels so I intend to play them. Thanks for taking the time to make these and putting your ideas and stories out there as I had a lot of fun reading this one and am eager and excited to see what else you have.
I really enjoyed reading this visual novel, thank you for making it! There's a lot of detail in the forest scene in particular, with the snowflakes and the snow resting on the tree branches.
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This was a really big concept to put into a smaller story. I enjoyed reading about what was going on and the dramas of these all-powerful seasonal beings. I feel like the solution was very cut and dry and without consequence which is why I wonder why they didn't do that before. I guess they were waiting because they thought she would eventually calm down accept what happened to her lover?
I liked the art and backgrounds a lot, they have charm, and imagination put into them. Sometimes the text went below the box and off the screen, like twice, and the music could've been calmer or more intense as it seemed like a more lighthearted situation was going on, other than the death of humanity. The music sounded urgent but gave a fun and pleasant tone making the mood of the music not really reflect any of the feelings that the characters were going through.
I don't really like giving out big criticisms like this but, this has a lot of potential. I saw that you had more visual novels so I intend to play them. Thanks for taking the time to make these and putting your ideas and stories out there as I had a lot of fun reading this one and am eager and excited to see what else you have.
I really enjoyed reading this visual novel, thank you for making it! There's a lot of detail in the forest scene in particular, with the snowflakes and the snow resting on the tree branches.